Under The Influence

[raymond trevitt]

hey raymond
i think you pack a lot well in this short piece.

one idea i had was to eliminate the "the influence of" and perhaps shorten the ending, but neither is necessary. a pleasant read, thanks for sharing

The use of the word 'influence' is meant to show a duality...positive, then negative

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thanks for testing the water by posting in novice first; though this is worthy of any of the other forums should you think otherwise.

drinking for pleasure and drinking to get drunk; or for the sake of drinking, you show two diametrically opposed ways to drink. (social and alone) the latter not so good; it has many layers of sadness swirling round your whisky glass. i have no nits to point out sorry; i enjoyed reading it.

thanks for the read.

still learning how to navigate this site....thank you for your input.