Emergency Parking
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it reads really well to me so i haven't done a line by.
repair feels forced or just too obvious.

i think you have a great analogy (is that the word?) in the last two stanza.
nice snapshot of an icy wheel-change done in a hurry.

thanks for the read.
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Messages In This Thread
Emergency Parking - by Philatone - 07-28-2012, 04:10 PM
RE: Emergency Parking - by billy - 07-28-2012, 06:08 PM
RE: Emergency Parking - by penguin - 07-29-2012, 07:18 PM
RE: Emergency Parking - by Philatone - 07-30-2012, 09:46 AM
RE: Emergency Parking - by tectak - 07-31-2012, 07:58 AM



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