Under The Influence
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Hello Raymond! I like this -- it seems simple in its construction but the final lines in particular are thought-provoking and quite sad. Whisky and wine have quite different connotations (though I love them both dearly!) -- wine is a far more sociable drink, according to the world at large, whereas whisky seems to turn up in popular culture as the drink of the high-powered businessman these days. I think L7 would work with just "the goddesses told me" or even "the goddesses said", so the statement is still qualified but the sarcastic edge is a little more understated.

Thank you for the read, I enjoyed this.
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Under The Influence - by raymond trevitt - 07-28-2012, 02:21 AM
RE: Under The Influence - by Leanne - 07-28-2012, 05:33 AM
RE: Under The Influence - by raymond trevitt - 07-28-2012, 06:15 AM
RE: Under The Influence - by Leanne - 07-28-2012, 07:23 AM
RE: Under The Influence - by Philatone - 07-28-2012, 01:25 PM
RE: Under The Influence - by raymond trevitt - 07-28-2012, 11:54 PM
RE: Under The Influence - by billy - 07-28-2012, 05:56 PM



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