Soylent Green

[Semicircle]

I chow on this corpse
realizing I forgot-
to rip off the tag

[Magpie]

Someone told me about this film recently because it's set in 2022, not had a chance to see it yet so can't really comment on the actual content of your poem.
however i'm thinking that you could drop 'that' and 'of' is a typo should be 'off', also i would lose the punctuation from short pieces like this unless it is totally necessary, but that's just my preference.

cheers for the read
mark

[Semicircle]

Someone told me about this film recently because it's set in 2022, not had a chance to see it yet so can't really comment on the actual content of your poem.
however i'm thinking that you could drop 'that' and 'of' is a typo should be 'off', also i would lose the punctuation from short pieces like this unless it is totally necessary, but that's just my preference.

cheers for the read
mark

I haven't watched it either. No one has. People only remember the soylent green of it all,
which was basically packaged corpses that are eaten in the future.

The movie was pretty corny I've heard.
Watch it for me, 
so I don't have to.