Haunted Woods

[Torkelburger]

Haunted Woods

I ask the Live Oaks
at the edge of the forest,
"What are you hiding?"

[Tiger the Lion]

I ask the Live Oaks
at the edge of the forest,
"What are you hiding?"

I think this one performs better if the title is included. What I mean is, as a haiku the title is pretty much cheating. As a short poem the title helps the piece along (as it's meant to) without being intrusive.

[Torkelburger]

Thank you. I've edited the original post and added the title.

[Valerie Please]

For me the Live Oaks makes this.

Haunted Woods

I ask the Live Oaks
at the edge of the forest,
"What are you hiding?"