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Perch
Rest a moment, little bird,
your heart is racing.
So what if an anxious autumn threatens snow?
Don't you know
I love you unconditionally?
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The third line is beautiful
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okay, it's heart tugger
because of the title i was expecting a poem about a fish. [i'm an ex angler though
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(11-14-2018, 02:20 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: Perch
Rest a moment, little bird,
your heart is racing.
So what if an anxious autumn threatens snow?
Don't you know
I love you unconditionally?
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A great line to pivot on, and yes it made me worry we were climbing a hill too fast and Id been ignoring my liitle bird so the closing re-assurance was welcomed by me. Enjoyed, Keith
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
