12-13-2016, 09:59 PM
Arrhythmia
two years on
it's you, not she
that quickensÂ
the foolish heart of me
two years on
it's you, not she
that quickensÂ
the foolish heart of me
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Arrhythmia
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12-13-2016, 10:23 PM
I like that I don't know who you (or she) is, gives it different ways to turn. sweet.
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12-14-2016, 01:06 AM
Effective. Also, affecting. Lovely work.
12-14-2016, 12:16 PM
hi tiger, good to see you posting.
somehow i feel the poem is peaking directly to me and i blush. okay that's a lie but it does have what i perceive as a universal quality to it, |
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