03-22-2015, 11:03 PM
Salivation
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lunch
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lunch
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Salivation
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03-24-2015, 01:49 AM
rubba dub dub thanks for the grub
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
--mark twain Bunx 
03-24-2015, 03:06 AM
Thanks for reading guys. The attempt here was a bit of a nod to the Hemingway 6-word poem. And secondly, for the title to be misread (some of the time) as "Salvation", which completely changes the meaning. Just playing word games.
Paul 
03-24-2015, 05:10 AM
Oh, I read it correctly! I could hear Pavlov's bells a dinging. I love 6 word poems, which is why I started that thread in fun about them. 3 words (if you include title) is definitely hard. I totally appreciate what you did, and I love the play on the title. I was just laughing in bemusement when I read it and probably should have delved deeper instead of offering a silly rhyme, which i NEVER do as you know.
love ya, mel.
03-24-2015, 06:37 AM
(03-24-2015, 05:10 AM)bena Wrote: Oh, I read it correctly! I could hear Pavlov's bells a dinging. I love 6 word poems, which is why I started that thread in fun about them. 3 words (if you include title) is definitely hard. I totally appreciate what you did, and I love the play on the title. I was just laughing in bemusement when I read it and probably should have delved deeper instead of offering a silly rhyme, which i NEVER do as you know.Don't worry Mel. I won't tell anyone that you only make rhymes for me. 
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