Fly-Ku

[Erthona]

Buzzzzzzzzzz it is a fly
he's taking a long time to




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[rayheinrich]

Buzzzzzzzzzz it is a fly
he's taking a long time to


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line three white on white
ah!
vision of issa


Though, technically, "Buzzzzzzzzzz" should have twelve "z"'s.

[Erthona]

"Though, technically, "Buzzzzzzzzzz" should have twelve "z"'s."

Yeah, I know I ran out.

Line three die

dale

[ChristopherSea]

SWAT was what my mind's eye read for line three.

[Erthona]

Works for me!

[Markworth]

Very cool My mind finished it with land, because the fly and the poem never landed.

[Tiger the Lion]

I finished with "die". And then, several 5 syllable version of "die". None of which were as effective as the blank 3rd line. Well done.

[Erthona]

Markworth, and TtL,

Thanks for your comments. I had forgotten I had written this and was coming to comment on it

Dale

[rayheinrich]

Markworth, and TtL,

Thanks for your comments. I had forgotten I had written this and was coming to comment on it

Dale

I had forgotten I had commented on this and was coming to comment on it when,
(slowly I turned) a tiny infinitesimal really quite small ittybitty sliver of my former
carnation whispered into my inner eerie earnestness that coming to comment on that which
has been commented on before is an entirely endearing part of the karmic circle
and was to be valued highly amongst us transcendently ticklish transients.

[Erthona]

tenuously tantamount to tempesting tornadic tribulations.


dale the alliterate

[rayheinrich]

tenuously tantamount to tempesting tornadic tribulations.

dale the alliterate