Shorties

[Bunx]

EDIT 1
Wow,
I want your cigarette.
So I can smoke addiction,
then never forget.

I choose to smoke.
Only to calm me down.
Cigars, give me shorties
and I'll turn my backwards smile
back around.

[TheWall0912]

I'm not sure what you mean by the line "So I can smoke something, then never forget." I feel like you can go into more detail here. Maybe a different word choice. Just my opinion though! Other than that I really like it. S2 is really well written. I enjoyed your last line very much because it was a nice play on words.

[Bunx]

the wall. changed up the diction on there. chose the word addiction.