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So, I was dirty talking the wife yesterday, and this is what I came up with:
Gotta leave it somewhere,
I’ll leave it in you.
We’ll roll together, baby,
that’s what we’ll do.
The neighbours can’t shame me,
though they do try.
Can I really help it
that I move ya t’cry?
So, baby, let it all out!
Fuck ‘em, baby: moan ‘n shout!
To subtle?
Mikey
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Oh yes, far too subtle!
Nothing really beats a good brag in poetry.
It could be worse
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thumbs up
I'll be there in a minute.
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(03-12-2013, 05:28 PM)newsclippings Wrote: thumbs up
Thumbs up? I must have misunderstood....too subtle.
I thought he was talking about a cock-up!
Best,
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thumbs in*
I'll be there in a minute.
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(03-12-2013, 05:37 PM)newsclippings Wrote: thumbs in*
It could be worse
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thumbs in and out
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To all the above stuff: Love it. Perfect workshop athmosphere!
cock up!
thumbs in! too cute! ,-)
can't get anymore subtle!
ty
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Glad my dirty talk brought some smiles.

Now I have a few new terms and themes to work with next I go a-wooing: cock, thumb, up, in, and brag.
Mikey.
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Haha! This is quite adorable! Loved it!
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Hokey Kokey, enjoyed
never make someone your priority when to them you are only an option
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Haha

Loved it
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why are mucky poems liked the best ?