First time at bat here
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Something I penned about 30 years ago. Not sure why or what it was intended to be about. My mom had it under a piece of glass on her coffee table after all of these years.

I stand alone in coldness and dark.
Muscles tense , I await the dawn,
rays of warmth dispel my fear.

I suppose this may have been an ode to my time in the USAF where I worked outside and usually on the midnight shift in Montana.
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I would say that it has quite a good start to it, but feels incomplete, as well, like there is much more to be told. Great start, though, you have talent, you should see if you can find the muse to begin writing again. Smile
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