Moderated By: Quixilated, Tiger the Lion
Users browsing this forum: 89 Guest(s)

Rules For Serious Critique:
This forum is for serious workshopping only. If you have no intention of responding to feedback and editing your poem, do not post here.
Due to poets being overly eager to post poetry (too many poems at once)
A new rule exists; One Poem Per Day max in any or all of the following: Basic Forum, Mild Critique Forum, and the Serious Critique Forum.

These rules do not apply elsewhere, though if you post without giving feedback elsewhere, you won't get many replies

Only post here if:
- you have proof read your poem and it is free of basic errors --
- you post at least one considered, suitably detailed comment on someone else's poem in this or another critique forum before posting a poem of your own.
- you are ready to receive honest, detailed criticism of your poem
- you are prepared to accept advice and suggestions to edit your poem

Your poem may be moved to a more suitable forum at the moderators' discretion.

If possible, leave a line-by-line or at least a partial line-by-line critique, as well as a comment outside the body of the poem. Ensure that it provides valuable feedback to the poet, even if it's all positive. A simple "I like this" is not appropriate for serious critique. Please comment to the best of your ability.

All posts should be directly related to criticism/analysis/improvement of the original post, the poem. From time to time it is expected that a discussion will arise from a point made in a comment. If it becomes apparent that comments are addressing other comments rather than the original post, a moderator will either move these posts to a new discussion thread in Poetry Discussion -- or for more robust discussion, to The Pig's Arse -- or, if necessary, the moderator will ask that further comments cease altogether. If, as the originator of a thread, you feel that your poem has been "hijacked" or that discussion has moved in a direction you are uncomfortable with, please send a PM to one of the moderators of this forum. It is not appropriate to engage in argument in a Critique forum.

No action will be taken by moderators to censure comments if it is deemed they are valid critique, however negative it may appear to the original poster. This is Serious Critique and not all feedback will be supportive of your poem.

Intensive critique and workshopping
Thread / Author Replies Views [asc] Last Post
Forum Announcements
    Giving And Getting Feedback And Critique - Or doing an edit of your poetry.(a must read) - - 09-01-2011, 10:42 AM
Normal Threads
    24 11,613 02-08-2013, 07:02 AM
Last Post: billy
    20 11,608 08-25-2013, 09:50 PM
Last Post: ChristopherSea
    22 11,498 02-21-2013, 12:03 AM
Last Post: tectak
   
The Check-Out (Pages: 1 2 )
tigrflye
22 11,495 10-29-2013, 12:46 PM
Last Post: Todd
    22 11,452 10-14-2024, 12:07 PM
Last Post: brynmawr1
    26 11,417 10-24-2017, 05:09 AM
Last Post: Achebe
    19 11,389 09-13-2013, 08:35 PM
Last Post: Todd
   
Generic Relationships (Pages: 1 2 )
rowens
24 11,388 07-25-2013, 08:13 AM
Last Post: billy
    22 11,374 01-24-2019, 04:02 PM
Last Post: busker
    24 11,335 10-21-2017, 02:30 AM
Last Post: Todd
    22 11,292 02-10-2012, 04:33 AM
Last Post: Leanne
   
a young girl, limping edit #1 (Pages: 1 2 )
just mercedes
23 11,218 12-25-2014, 05:06 AM
Last Post: Leah S.
    18 11,189 02-23-2014, 05:30 AM
Last Post: ChristopherSea
   
Handbasket (Pages: 1 2 )
21 11,177 02-28-2013, 01:15 PM
Last Post: Wildcard
   
Well-Wisher. (Pages: 1 2 )
20 11,177 08-28-2014, 03:35 AM
Last Post: tectak
    17 11,105 08-29-2014, 07:02 PM
Last Post: billy
    17 11,077 04-12-2019, 12:32 AM
Last Post: Thunderembargo
   
Biding time (Pages: 1 2 )
21 11,050 07-09-2013, 03:41 AM
Last Post: Brownlie
   
Half Empty (Pages: 1 2 )
24 11,044 06-05-2014, 07:47 AM
Last Post: Erthona
    17 10,934 01-10-2022, 01:57 AM
Last Post: tribaltea33


  1 new thread
  Hot Thread (New)
  Hot Thread (No New)
  No New Posts
  Contains Posts by You
 


Do NOT follow this link or you will be banned from the site!