Moderated By: Quixilated, Tiger the Lion
Users browsing this forum: 329 Guest(s)

Mild Critique Forum Rules
Due to poets being overly eager to post poetry (too many poems at once)
A new rule exists; One Poem Per Day max in any or all of the following: Basic Forum, Mild Critique Forum, and the Serious Critique Forum.

Only post here if:
- you have read your poem and think it is free of basic errors --
- you post at least one considered, suitably detailed comment on someone else's poem in this or another critique forum before posting a poem of your own.
- you are ready to receive honest, detailed criticism of your poem
- you are prepared to accept advice and suggestions to edit your poem

If possible leave a couple of points in the body of the poem, as well as a comment outside the body of the poem. Ensure that it provides valuable feedback to the poet, even if it's all positive. A simple "I like this" is not appropriate for serious critique. Please comment to the best of your ability.

All posts should be directly related to criticism/analysis/improvement of the original post, the poem. From time to time it is expected that a discussion will arise from a point made in a comment. If it becomes apparent that comments are addressing other comments rather than the original post, a moderator will either move these posts to a new discussion thread in Poetry Discussion -- or for more robust discussion, to The Pig's Arse -- or, if necessary, the moderator will ask that further comments cease altogether. If, as the originator of a thread, you feel that your poem has been "hijacked" or that discussion has moved in a direction you are uncomfortable with, please send a PM to one of the moderators of this forum. It is not appropriate to engage in argument in a Critique forum.

No action will be taken by moderators to censure comments if it is deemed they are valid critique, however negative it may appear to the original poster. This is Serious Critique and not all feedback will be supportive of your poem

Mild to moderate critique
Thread [asc] / Author Replies Views Last Post
Forum Announcements
    Giving And Getting Feedback And Critique - Or doing an edit of your poetry.(a must read) - - 09-01-2011, 10:40 AM
Normal Threads
    20 8,051 05-29-2017, 12:59 AM
Last Post: Todd
    13 5,119 04-09-2014, 06:02 AM
Last Post: crow
    6 2,451 05-18-2013, 11:23 PM
Last Post: Zerric
    8 2,548 09-11-2016, 02:40 PM
Last Post: Vox_Nihilis
   
Go to first unread post Existence
hulk888
4 2,291 11-04-2012, 10:50 AM
Last Post: Aish
    6 2,353 12-22-2016, 11:23 PM
Last Post: Sparkydashforth
    4 1,501 10-05-2016, 03:42 AM
Last Post: CRNDLSM
    2 1,384 09-11-2013, 05:35 AM
Last Post: Spikerider
    3 1,540 10-06-2012, 07:00 AM
Last Post: billy
    12 4,662 03-05-2014, 12:52 PM
Last Post: geoff
    6 2,705 11-25-2012, 10:22 PM
Last Post: Art Deco
    2 1,437 10-05-2012, 05:28 PM
Last Post: Keith
    12 5,209 06-25-2014, 04:23 AM
Last Post: nicksherman
    1 1,086 10-23-2012, 01:38 PM
Last Post: billy
    6 3,436 08-04-2014, 03:06 AM
Last Post: Pink_Bunny
    6 2,506 06-21-2016, 02:29 AM
Last Post: Acephale
    3 1,744 06-16-2018, 11:32 AM
Last Post: GrhmJngL
   
Go to first unread post Eulogy to Mechanical Men
Merfyn Dafydd
3 1,446 11-30-2015, 10:45 AM
Last Post: xyroph
    4 1,976 04-16-2025, 09:06 AM
Last Post: The_system_screams
   
Go to first unread post Etheree
Martyr
3 1,637 08-12-2013, 12:44 PM
Last Post: Martyr


  1 new thread
  Hot Thread (New)
  Hot Thread (No New)
  No New Posts
  Contains Posts by You
 


Do NOT follow this link or you will be banned from the site!